imprisoned
years ago ..i saw a window in the sky
i felt a flutter in my chest
lightly i leapt and opened it..
a charming world appeared behind ,two deep eyes lurking out there
who was staring at whom.me or it ?
coming closer to take a glance…a sigh came out me.
what beauty !..breathlessly wide eyed i began to chase .
every motion ,song , laugh , tear , beauty and grace.
days and nights came over me Mesmerizing still.
and a tear has dropped …knowing the fact .
am imprisoned .my head is out, my body is in.
i have been separated in two parts .
to never be there , never be here .
never be complete again.
Fatma
November 4th, 2006 at 7:54 pm
i like your words
and i love your pages and design
but i didnt like the way to put comment it isnt practical
keep it up
December 23rd, 2006 at 3:44 am
thanks 3lool for your opinion..i think i updated the comments…sorry for being late on replaying i just wasn’t following my blog lately.
March 15th, 2007 at 12:56 am
it’s my first visit to that blog, i adore poetry so i liked that post soo much. the word are so nice and impressive,,i was reallly impressed,,,
March 15th, 2007 at 2:29 am
heey , Pakinam : am very pleased for your visit and opinion , i like poetry too so we have things in common
. waiting to see you again .
March 15th, 2007 at 2:45 am
thanks 4 ur reply,,,and greattt thanks for ur fabolous comment on my poem at my blog..a,m really happy u liked it, u know writing poetry is the best thing in my life…..i am waiting for ur visits…and search for a singer to sing my poem
thanks
March 15th, 2007 at 3:19 am
you have a talent you should be proud of , i will wait your poems always be sure of that
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